{"id":2024,"date":"2015-12-22T16:05:11","date_gmt":"2015-12-22T16:05:11","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/?p=2024"},"modified":"2019-07-27T16:26:32","modified_gmt":"2019-07-27T20:26:32","slug":"the-expanse-gives-leviathan-wakes-the-juice-it-needed","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/the-expanse-gives-leviathan-wakes-the-juice-it-needed\/","title":{"rendered":"&#8220;The Expanse&#8221; Gives &#8220;Leviathan Wakes&#8221; The Juice it Needed"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>People often complain that a movie or TV series isn&#8217;t &#8220;as good as the book.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>With SyFy&#8217;s <em>The Expanse<\/em>, the opposite is true: the writers have improved a dull, sometimes amateurish novel. Yes, I know <em>Leviathan Wakes<\/em> has a great cover blurb from George R.R. Martin. But that&#8217;s not surprising: one of the people who wrote it is his assistant (James S. A. Corey is a pseudonym for Daniel Abraham and Ty Franck). It also got a Hugo Award nomination. Again, anything with that kind of pedigree is sure to get noticed and generate sales.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/12\/expanse.jpg\" rel=\"attachment wp-att-2040\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-2040 aligncenter\" src=\"http:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/12\/expanse-300x169.jpg\" alt=\"expanse\" width=\"300\" height=\"169\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/12\/expanse-300x169.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/12\/expanse-768x432.jpg 768w, https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/12\/expanse-1024x576.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/12\/expanse-500x281.jpg 500w, https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/12\/expanse.jpg 1920w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>But it&#8217;s a long-winded novel that never really lives up to the clever premise of fierce rivalry between Earth and its smarter, classier, richer colony Mars. Their mutual pawn is the resource-starved Asteroid Belt, peopled by low-gravity creole-speakers who resent being looked down on.<\/p>\n<p>There are some good action sequences in Leviathan Wakes, which tries to blend a classic PI novel with &#8220;space opera,&#8221; but the book rarely comes alive. That&#8217;s too bad, because the authors have come up with some great details like carpeting that&#8217;s more durable than stone and a colorful Belter dialect that blends many languages.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/12\/expanse-shot.jpg\" rel=\"attachment wp-att-2043\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-2043 aligncenter\" src=\"http:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/12\/expanse-shot-300x169.jpg\" alt=\"expanse shot\" width=\"300\" height=\"169\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/12\/expanse-shot-300x169.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/12\/expanse-shot-768x432.jpg 768w, https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/12\/expanse-shot-1024x576.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/12\/expanse-shot-500x281.jpg 500w, https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/12\/expanse-shot-800x450.jpg 800w, https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/12\/expanse-shot.jpg 1920w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a>The overall problem might be the co-authorship. Chapters alternate between the third person point of view of an executive officer of a ship bringing ice to the water-starved Belt (Holden) and a detective on the Belt looking for a lost rich girl (Miller). That girl weirdly becomes a major third character even after she dies, haunting Miller&#8217;s imagination (and worse). It&#8217;s a shame, because she&#8217;s a bore and just won&#8217;t shut up.<\/p>\n<p>The low-gravity Belters are tall and thin-boned, angry, underprivileged, resentful, and violent&#8211;but we don&#8217;t see and hear enough of them. Instead, we get lots of shallow characterizations throughout; sketchy settings; a thinly-imagined future where they still have bagels, sushi, and metal coffee pots; and writing that barely serves its purpose or even falls flat. What&#8217;s it supposed to mean that Holden walks with &#8220;uncommented athleticism&#8221;?<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"http:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/12\/Expanse_Ship.jpg\" rel=\"attachment wp-att-2041\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-2041 aligncenter\" src=\"http:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/12\/Expanse_Ship-300x300.jpg\" alt=\"Expanse_Ship\" width=\"300\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/12\/Expanse_Ship-300x300.jpg 300w, https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/12\/Expanse_Ship-150x150.jpg 150w, https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/12\/Expanse_Ship-200x200.jpg 200w, https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2015\/12\/Expanse_Ship.jpg 600w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a>Holden and Miller don&#8217;t meet for a few hundred pages and when they do, the writers retell events from each protagonist&#8217;s shallow perspective, which gets tedious. Neither one is very compelling when it comes down to it, and as a team, they&#8217;re twice as dull.\u00a0 Almost as dull as the flat ending.<\/p>\n<p>But none of that matters in <em>The Expanse<\/em>, which revs the book up with a sexy cast, excellent FX, and a tighter, leaner story line. Scenes that drag in the novel speed by. And you don&#8217;t have to deal with bad prose, just commercials which you can fast forward through.<\/p>\n<p>Martin was more than kind to the authors of <em>Leviathan Wakes<\/em>, but they don&#8217;t even approach his mastery of the writing craft.<\/p>\n<p><strong>Lev Raphael&#8217;s books &#8212; from mystery to memoir &#8212; can be found on <a href=\"http:\/\/www.amazon.com\/s\/ref=nb_sb_ss_i_1_18?url=search-alias%3Daps&amp;field-keywords=lev+raphael+kindle&amp;sprefix=lev+raphael+kindle%2Caps%2C157\">Amazon.<\/a><\/strong><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>People often complain that a movie or TV series isn&#8217;t &#8220;as good as the book.&#8221; With SyFy&#8217;s The Expanse, the opposite is true: the writers have improved a dull, sometimes amateurish novel. Yes, I know Leviathan Wakes has a great cover blurb from George R.R. Martin. But that&#8217;s not surprising: one of the people who &#8230; <a title=\"&#8220;The Expanse&#8221; Gives &#8220;Leviathan Wakes&#8221; The Juice it Needed\" class=\"read-more\" href=\"https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/the-expanse-gives-leviathan-wakes-the-juice-it-needed\/\" aria-label=\"Read more about &#8220;The Expanse&#8221; Gives &#8220;Leviathan Wakes&#8221; The Juice it Needed\">Read more<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[662],"tags":[667,669,668,663,664,670,666,665],"class_list":["post-2024","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-science-fiction","tag-george-r-r-martin","tag-james-s-a-corey","tag-leviathan-wakes","tag-sci-fi","tag-science-fiction","tag-science-fiction-series","tag-syfy-channel","tag-the-expanse"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2024","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/2"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=2024"}],"version-history":[{"count":6,"href":"https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2024\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":4980,"href":"https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/2024\/revisions\/4980"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=2024"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=2024"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.levraphael.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=2024"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}